Zal Returns to Kabul, Sahm and Rudabeh
Return, hospitality and marriage convert threatened destruction into kinship. The close gives the couple a shared seat, while Sahm resumes the service that first separated father and son.
The chapter in five texts
| Text | Chapter treatment and distinctive choices |
|---|---|
| F&R English | Seventy-six couplets complete reception, wedding, travel and shared rule, retaining fuller variants in the arrival, departure and final crown. |
| Moscow | Pp 230–235 retain the public settlement and departure with substantial local bracketed material. |
| Mohl | Pp 172–175 support the forewarned reception, Zal’s additional week and Rudabeh’s final crown. |
| Ganjoor | Sh23 has 25 and sh24 46 couplets, total 71. Its unannounced arrival and joint departure differ from the fuller English sequence. |
| Khaleghi | Pp 257–264 carry the return and marriage; p 264 records the bride-crowning close in the apparatus. The next birth narrative begins at p 265. |
Parallel text
English left · Persian right. Ganjoor is the reference except where a row names a printed source. Select a number to open the relevant note. G identifiers distinguish digital sections across chapter boundaries.
Narrative and poetic form
The English earns its expansive conclusion by bringing private vows into public forms: an oath, a visit, a marriage contract, a wealth record and a shared seat. The fuller-tradition variants are stated locally so that celebration does not erase textual precision.
Couplet commentary
Quoted text · evidence · interpretation1–6An announced welcome differs between presentationsPrinted reception variant
Ganjoor says no one knew of the approach and no ceremonial reception went out. Mohl p 172 instead gives those who knew hurrying to meet him, supporting English 2. Sahm’s embrace follows in both sequences.
This is a definite local narrative variant. The English need not be corrected to Ganjoor’s surprise arrival when the fuller printed reading supports its welcome. The embrace is a renewed bond, now relieved of the earlier dispute.
7–14Sahm retells the successful embassy
The father reports Sindokht’s request, his promise, the agreed marriage and invitation, then asks what answer to give the waiting messenger.
The English keeps the retrospective report even though readers have seen the negotiation. Repetition has a different audience and function here: the son learns that the father has committed himself to a reconciled public course.
15–24Desire hastens the military party
Zal flushes with joy, urges the Kabul journey and cares for little speech outside the beloved. A courier announces the approaching party and Mehrab rejoices.
The English compresses Ganjoor’s repeated musical joy at the end of m23 into the transition to the next scene. Its private-sounding consultation is an expansion of the request to lead the force toward Kabul, not evidence of a separate marriage bargain concealed from Sindokht.
25–34The day of reckoning becomes a feast image
Colored standards, instruments, elephants and the surprising resemblance to resurrection precede the embrace and Mehrab’s crown for Zal. Ganjoor lists white where English 27 gives green.
The rhetorical question magnifies the collective noise; it does not announce that the epic’s actual last judgment has arrived. The crown marks the honored son-in-law within a ceremonial welcome, not the deposition of the Shah of Iran.
35–42The city shares the reconciliation
The music, scented horses, Sindokht’s three hundred attendants and distributions give the event a civic scale. Ganjoor imagines wild and tame creatures as musicians; English 37 substitutes doors and rooftops joining the song.
The English transfers the all-encompassing animation from creatures to city fabric. The effect is comparable but the objects differ. Material giving makes the peace visible to people outside the two royal households.
43–49The requested gift accompanies a playful unveiling
Sahm smiles and asks to see Rudabeh; Sindokht asks for the gift; he offers whatever she wants and is astonished when he sees the bride.
The English’s half-jesting tone has support in the smile and expansive answer. Material exchange remains real within the ceremony, but the passage should not be flattened into an account in which the woman’s own earlier choice never mattered.
50–55A public marriage and a written wealth record
The contract is bound according to faith and custom; both sit on one throne and a written treasure account is read.
The English retains legal and ritual publicness after the earlier private vow. The single shared throne is an important visual completion of the pair’s equality as a couple; the document is a wealth schedule, not a new copy of the poem.
56–62The fuller sequence separates two departuresFuller chronology and departure variant
Ganjoor gives one week inside, three weeks in the garden, then Sahm departing with Zal. Mohl p 174 additionally lets Zal stay a week after Sahm’s departure. English follows the latter sequence. Its repeated one-week phrasing at 56 and 58 can describe the same first week rather than two consecutive weeks.
The extra stay is transmitted narrative. The note distinguishes versions of the departure instead of silently forcing every witness onto a single itinerary or adding the repeated first-week descriptions into an unnecessary extra week.
63–68Travel and the people who stay behind
Bridal conveyances carry the party to Sistan/Nimruz; Sahm holds a three-day feast; Sindokht stays while Mehrab and his force return to Kabul.
The English makes the subject of the return explicit where a reader can otherwise lose track among several rulers. Sindokht’s staying is the local scene’s statement; it does not authorize an unrecorded permanent separation from her husband.
69–76A shared seat before renewed service
Sahm entrusts rule to Zal and departs toward Gorgasaran and Bakhtar under the charter’s obligation. Mohl p 175 adds the closing Rudabeh crown couplet retained in English 76; Khaleghi p 264 preserves that couplet in the apparatus; the English also makes Sahm’s handoff explicit in direct address.
The translation’s fuller close is supported. The bride’s crown recognizes her place beside Zal; it is not evidence that she has been installed as the supreme Shah. The story ends with a household established and service resumed, not with all future danger abolished.
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