Kakouy Attacks the Iranians
A new champion from Zahhak’s line interrupts the campaign. Manuchehr’s personal combat tests the martial authority previously claimed in speech.
The chapter in five texts
| Text | Chapter treatment and distinctive choices |
|---|---|
| F&R English | Thirty-nine couplets retain the complete Kakouy interlude and its demanding single combat. |
| Moscow | P 128 note 20 registers the Kakouy battle as omitted from the continuous narrative and points to its transmission elsewhere. |
| Mohl | Pp 100–102 print the encounter and support the English chapter’s narrative substance. |
| Ganjoor | The captured sequence moves from the fortress capture to Salm’s flight; Kakouy has no poem-body chapter or intervening passage. |
| Khaleghi | Pp 148–150 retain Kakouy’s combat in the main narrative. Thus omission from Ganjoor is not evidence of omission from Khaleghi. |
Parallel text
English left · Persian right. Ganjoor is the reference except where a row names a printed source. Select a number to open the relevant note. G identifiers distinguish digital sections across chapter boundaries.
Narrative and poetic form
This is a decisive case for the project’s multi-text method. The English preserves a real transmitted episode, and Khaleghi’s presence alongside Mohl prevents a misleading shorthand in which every fuller narrative is assigned to one edition and every shorter one to another.
Couplet commentary
Quoted text · evidence · interpretation1–10Kakouy enters from the old enemy’s line
Mohl p 100 presents the returned Gharan and Manuchehr’s account of Kakouy, a descendant of Zahhak from Gang Dezh-Hokht. Khaleghi pp 148–149 retains the encounter in its main narrative. Ganjoor has no intervening Kakouy episode.
The English restores an attested narrative strand that connects the present war to the earlier defeated tyranny. “Battle-div” describes a human warrior’s ferocity; it does not make Kakouy a supernatural Div.
11–17The king takes the burden from his general
Mohl p 100 gives Gharan’s offer and Manuchehr’s response that Gharan has already borne enough of the difficult task.
The English makes command reciprocal rather than merely hierarchical. The king’s decision to fight expresses responsibility toward an exhausted subordinate as well as confidence in his own strength.
18–27A human warrior described with monstrous force
Mohl pp 100–101 and Khaleghi p 149 give the instruments, darkened air, arrows, blood and the two champions’ elephant-like encounter.
The figurative creatures intensify human combat. They should not be turned into literal transformations, and the two fighters’ opposing causes should not be collapsed merely because both are described in the same heroic idiom.
28–34Armor yields; the duel continues
Khaleghi pp 149–150 and Mohl p 101 describe the spear at the belt, broken armor, answering sword-stroke and prolonged fight.
The English distinguishes damage to equipment from a decisive injury. The extended exchange makes Kakouy a credible danger; the eventual victory is not won simply because the enemy bears an evil pedigree.
35–39Strength resolves the duelEpisode has different editorial extent
Khaleghi p 150 and Mohl pp 101–102 end the fight with a belt-grip, lifting from the saddle and fatal sword action. Moscow p 128 note 20 refers to the Kakouy battle as an omitted episode in its continuous text rather than printing the complete combat there.
The English’s full chapter has Mohl and Khaleghi support, though it is absent from Ganjoor and from Moscow’s continuous narrative at this point. This is an important difference of extent, not grounds for treating the chapter as an English invention.
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